Friday, May 1, 2015

This month's form was pantoum.  A fun form which I would have liked to have spent additional time exploring.  The words we agreed to incorporate were "flight" and "certainties".



steppes
By John C Lewis
(all rights reserved, 4/9/15)

ascend this flight of barren steppes
attain the rough-hewn certainties
afforded by these endless plains
astride a charger fierce and fast

attain the rough-hewn certainties
amid the sage and sha da wang
astride a charger fierce and fast
alongside falcon, lynx and fox

amid the sage and sha da wang
afforded by these endless plains
alongside falcon, lynx and fox
ascend this flight of barren steppes






rejected phrases
4/20/2015
(By John C. Lewis; all rights reserved)

rejected phrases take to flight
wistfully circling the newborn poem
convinced their time will never come
forlornly they seek a different home

wistfully circling the newborn poem
bruised by the certainties of slight
they move off to seek a different home
to find a form that’s their birthright

bruised by the certainties of slight
convinced their time will never come
to find a form that’s their birthright
rejected phrases take to flight

2 comments:

  1. Steppes is very Genghis-y, the wild, rough-hewn words lending themselves nicely to a poem with so many animals - and I had to look up sha da wang, admittedly. Discovering ordinary astragalus was a surprise! Nicely done.

    I'm feeling great pity for the rejected phrases... the "certainty of slights" is probably one of the most tragic poetic phrases, EVER. ☺

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  2. Hope you got my e-mail, Tanita! I was going to reply here but wanted to send you the photo of the young boy racing across the steppes on his charger.

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